(Actual question). Turns out we really like writing period, but are running into some concerns of colloquialism.
But hey, 13,640 words! More than makes up for the words we didn’t make yesterday while we were planning. (Also, value of planning: Now we know more what we’re doing, 2k+ words come pretty easily.)
Tomorrow, once we recover, we’re gonna see about putting together an excerpt of what we have so far. So stay tuned for that.